when i was solitarily standing on the road,
you filled the void of a friend
you came as an angel and changed my world
changed my perspective changed my goals....
focus is what you taught me
with revere i look at you
u channelise optimism
and i gave away pessimism...
a sweet friend, a humble soul
thank you for being the wonderful support
peace is what you preach...
peace is what the world lacks but one thing it surely has
and thats you.....
7 comments:
Triple S. (Short. Simple. Sweet)I'm bad at understanding poems. This one I could, if we can call it a poem, which I think it is, isnt it? :P
hey nice one i guess aty end of the day weall wnat is peace of mind
Smooth flow of the poem.
Liked the thought behind it.
yes, this is good....it's evolved from a rare genome indeed....
Did u do it....Amazing!
hmmmmmmmmmmm good one..
good job..!!
Really creative work .
the poetry skills are at place .
it defines friendship and takes us to the by gone days of love and pals , which no longer exists .
good dream , which the globe needs and one aspires for .
we have to make this a reality.
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