Monday, January 8, 2007

Thank you my friend..

when i was solitarily standing on the road,
you filled the void of a friend
you came as an angel and changed my world
changed my perspective changed my goals....
focus is what you taught me
with revere i look at you
u channelise optimism
and i gave away pessimism...
a sweet friend, a humble soul
thank you for being the wonderful support
peace is what you preach...
peace is what the world lacks but one thing it surely has
and thats you.....



7 comments:

Arcopol Chaudhuri said...

Triple S. (Short. Simple. Sweet)I'm bad at understanding poems. This one I could, if we can call it a poem, which I think it is, isnt it? :P

Ashwin said...

hey nice one i guess aty end of the day weall wnat is peace of mind

Dead Angel said...

Smooth flow of the poem.
Liked the thought behind it.

oliverwithatwist said...

yes, this is good....it's evolved from a rare genome indeed....

cHaTtErBoX said...

Did u do it....Amazing!

sneha said...

hmmmmmmmmmmm good one..

good job..!!

rahul barfal said...

Really creative work .
the poetry skills are at place .

it defines friendship and takes us to the by gone days of love and pals , which no longer exists .

good dream , which the globe needs and one aspires for .
we have to make this a reality.